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American Beauty

 

On VIDEO: JANE BURNHAM lays in bed, wearing a tank top. She's

sixteen, with dark, intense eyes.

 

JANE

I need a father who's a role model, not

some horny geek-boy who's gonna spray his

shorts whenever I bring a girlfriend home

from school.

(snorts)

What a lame-o. Somebody really should put

him out of his misery.

 

Her mind wanders for a beat.

 

RICKY (O.C.)

Want me to kill him for you?

 

Jane looks at us and sits up.

 

JANE

(deadpan)

Yeah, would you?

 

FADE TO BLACK.

 

 

FADE IN:

 

EXT. ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - EARLY MORNING

 

We're FLYING above suburban America, DESCENDING SLOWLY toward

a tree-lined street.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

My name is Lester Burnham. This is my

neighborhood. This is my street. This...

is my life. I'm forty-two years old. In

less than a year, I'll be dead.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS

 

We're looking down at a king-sized BED from OVERHEAD:

 

LESTER BURNHAM lies sleeping amidst expensive bed linens,

face down, wearing PAJAMAS. An irritating ALARM CLOCK RINGS.

Lester gropes blindly to shut it off.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

Of course, I don't know that yet. He

rolls over, looks up at us and sighs. He

doesn't seem too thrilled at the prospect

of a new day.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

2.

CONTINUED:

 

 

LESTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)

And in a way, I'm dead already.

 

He sits up and puts on his slippers.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - MASTER BATH - MOMENTS LATER

 

Lester thrusts his face directly into a steaming hot shower.

 

ANGLE from outside the shower: Lester's naked body is

silhouetted through the fogged-up glass door. It becomes

apparent he is masturbating.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

 

(amused)

Look at me, jerking off in the shower.

(then)

This will be the high point of my day.

It's all downhill from here.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER

 

CLOSE on a single, dewy AMERICAN BEAUTY ROSE. A gloved hand

with CLIPPERS appears and SNIPS the flower off.

 

CAROLYN BURNHAM tends her rose bushes in front of the Burnham

house. A very well-put together woman of forty, she wears

color-coordinated gardening togs and has lots of useful and

expensive tools.

 

Lester watches her through a WINDOW on the first floor,

peeping out through the drapes.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

That's my wife Carolyn. See the way the

handle on those pruning shears matches

her gardening clogs? That's not an

accident.

 

EXT. JIMS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

In the fenced front yard of the house next door, a dog BARKS

repeatedly. A MAN in a conservative suit (JIM #1) chastises

the barking dog.

 

JIM #1

Hush, Bitsy. You hush. What is wrong?

 

LESTER (V.O.)

 

That's our next-door neighbor Jim.

 

A second MAN in a conservative suit (JIM #2) comes out of the

house.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

3.

CONTINUED:

 

 

LESTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)

And that's his lover, Jim.

 

JIM #2

(re: barking dog)

What in the world is wrong with her? She

had a walk this morning.

 

 

JIM #1

And a jerky treat.

 

JIM #2

You spoil her.

(sternly)

Bitsy. No bark. Come inside. Now.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

Lester watches all this from the window.

 

CAROLYN

Good morning, Jim!

 

Jim #1 walks toward the fence to greet Carolyn.

 

JIM #1

 

Morning, Carolyn.

 

CAROLYN

(overly friendly)

I just love your tie! That color!

 

JIM #1

I just love your roses. How do you get

them to flourish like this?

 

CAROLYN

Well, I'll tell you. Egg shells and

Miracle Grow.

 

Jim #1 and Carolyn continue to chat, unaware that Lester is

watching them.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

 

Man. I get exhausted just watching her.

 

Lester's POV: We can't hear what Jim and Carolyn are saying,

but she's overly animated, like a TV talk show host.

 

LESTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)

She wasn't always like this. She used to

be happy. We used to be happy.

 

4.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - JANE'S ROOM - CONTINUOUS

 

JANE is seated at her desk, working at her computer.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

 

My daughter Jane. Only child.

 

CLOSE on the COMPUTER MONITOR: A PERSONAL BANKING SOFTWARE

window suddenly disappears to reveal another window: a

PLASTIC SURGERY WEBSITE, featuring clinical "before" and

"after" photos of surgically augmented breasts.

 

LESTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Janie's a pretty typical teenager. Angry,

insecure, confused. I wish I could tell

her that's all going to pass...

 

Outside, a CAR HORN BLARES. Jane stuffs items into her

BACKPACK.

 

LESTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)

But I don't want to lie to her.

 

We HEAR the CAR HORN again from outside. Jane studies herself

in a mirror, then shifts to get a good profile of her

breasts.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

Carolyn stands next to a platinum-colored MERCEDES-BENZ

ML320, reaching in through the drivers' window to blow the

HORN again.

 

Jane shuffles out of the house, her backpack slung over her

shoulder.

 

CAROLYN

 

Jane. Honey. Are you trying to look

unattractive?

 

JANE

Yes.

 

CAROLYN

Well, congratulations. You've succeeded

admirably.

 

Jane gets in the car. Lester hurries out the front door,

carrying a BRIEFCASE.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

5.

CONTINUED:

 

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

Lester, could you make me a little later,

please? Because I'm not quite late

enough.

 

Lester's briefcase suddenly springs open and his papers spill

all over the driveway. He drops to his knees to gather

everything.

 

JANE

Nice going, Dad.

 

Lester smiles sheepishly, trying to lighten the moment.

 

His POV: Carolyn looks down at us, contemptuous but also

bored, as if she gave up expecting anything more long ago.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

Both my wife and daughter think I'm this

gigantic loser, and... they're right.

 

INT. MERCEDES-BENZ ML320 - A SHORT TIME LATER

 

Carolyn is driving; Jane stares out the window. Lester is

asleep in the back seat.

 

LESTER (V.O.)

 

I have lost something. I'm not exactly

sure what it is, but I know I didn't

always feel this... sedated. But you know

what? It's never too late to get it back.

 

INT. OFFICE BUILDING - DAY

 

Lester sits at his workstation, a BEIGE CUBICLE surrounded by

IDENTICAL BEIGE CUBICLES. He's staring at a computer monitor

and talking on a HEADSET PHONE. The beleaguered expression on

his face is at odds with the light, friendly tone of his

voice.

 

LESTER

Hello, this is Lester Burnham from Media

Monthly magazine, I'm calling for Mr.

Tamblin, please?... Well, we're all under

a deadline here, uh, but you see, there

is some basic information about the

product launch that isn't even covered in

your press release and I... Yeah. Can I

ask you a question? Who is Tamblin? Does

he exist? 'Cause he doesn't ever seem to

come in... Yeah, okay, I'll leave my

number...

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

6.

CONTINUED:

 

 

BRAD, a dapper man in his thirties, approaches and observes

Lester, who is unaware of his presence.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

It's 555 0199. Lester Burnham. Thank you!

 

Lester disconnects the call, obviously irritated.

 

BRAD

Hey Les. You got a minute?

 

Lester turns around, smiling perfunctorily

 

LESTER

For you, Brad? I've got five.

 

INT. BRAD'S OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER

 

Brad is seated behind his desk in his big corner office.

 

 

BRAD

I'm sure you can understand our need to

cut corners around here.

 

Lester sits across from him, looking small and isolated.

 

LESTER

Oh, sure. Times are tight, and you gotta

free up cash. Gotta spend money to make

money. Right?

 

BRAD

Exactly. So...

 

Brad stands, ready to usher Lester out.

 

LESTER

(blurts)

Like the time when Mr. Flournoy used the

company MasterCard to pay for that

hooker, and then she used the card

numbers and stayed at the St. Regis for,

what was it, like, three months?

 

BRAD

 

(startled)

That's unsubstantiated gossip.

 

LESTER

That's fifty thousand dollars. That's

somebody's salary. That's somebody who's

gonna get fired because Craig has to pay

women to fuck him!

 

(CONTINUED)

 

7.

CONTINUED:

 

 

BRAD

Jesus. Calm down. Nobody's getting fired

yet. That's why we're having everyone

write out a job description, mapping out

in detail how they contribute. That way,

management can assess who's valuable and--

 

 

LESTER

Who's expendable.

 

BRAD

It's just business.

 

LESTER

(angry)

I've been writing for this magazine for

fourteen years, Brad. You've been here

how long, a whole month?

 

BRAD

(frank)

I'm one of the good guys, Les. I'm trying

to level with you. This is your one

chance to save your job.

 

Lester stares at him, powerless.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON

 

 

A MOVING VAN is parked in front of the COLONIAL HOUSE next

door to the Burnhams'. Movers carry furniture toward the

house.

 

The Mercedes-Benz pulls into the Burnham driveway. Carolyn

drives, Lester is in the passenger seat.

 

CAROLYN

--there is no decision, you just write

the damn thing!

 

LESTER

You don't think it's weird and kinda

fascist?

 

CAROLYN

Possibly. But you don't want to be

unemployed.

 

LESTER

Oh, well, let's just all sell our souls

and work for Satan, because it's more

convenient that way.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

8.

CONTINUED:

 

 

CAROLYN

Could you be just a little bit more

dramatic, please, huh?

 

As they get out of the car, Carolyn scopes out the MOVERS

next door.

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

So we've finally got new neighbors. You

know, if the Lomans had let me represent

them, instead of--

(heavy disdain)

--"The Real Estate King," that house

would never have sat on the market for

six months.

 

She heads into the house, followed by Lester.

 

 

LESTER

Well, they were still mad at you for

cutting down their sycamore.

 

CAROLYN

Their sycamore? C'mon! A substantial

portion of the root structure was on our

property. You know that. How can you call

it their sycamore? I wouldn't have the

heart to just cut down something if it

wasn't partially mine, which of course it

was.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - DINING ROOM - LATER THAT NIGHT

 

We HEAR EASY-LISTENING MUSIC.

 

Lester, Carolyn and Jane are eating dinner by CANDLELIGHT.

RED ROSES are bunched in a vase at the center of the table.

Nobody makes eye contact, or even seems aware of anybody

else's presence, until...

 

JANE

Mom, do we always have to listen to this

elevator music?

 

CAROLYN

 

(considers)

No. No, we don't. As soon as you've

prepared a nutritious yet savory meal

that I'm about to eat, you can listen to

whatever you like.

 

A long beat. Lester suddenly turns to Jane.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

9.

CONTINUED:

 

 

LESTER

So Janie, how was school?

 

JANE

(suspicious)

It was okay.

 

 

LESTER

Just okay?

 

JANE

No, Dad. It was spec-tac-ular.

 

A beat.

 

LESTER

Well, you want to know how things went at

my job today?

 

Now she looks at him as if he's lost his mind.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

They've hired this efficiency expert,

this really friendly guy named Brad, how

perfect is that? And he's basically there

to make it seem like they're justified in

firing somebody, because they couldn't

just come right out and say that, could

they? No, no, that would be too...

honest. And so they've asked us--

(off her look)

--you couldn't possibly care any less,

could you?

 

Carolyn is watching this closely.

 

JANE

 

(uncomfortable)

Well, what do you expect? You can't all

of a sudden be my best friend, just

because you had a bad day.

 

She gets up and heads toward the kitchen.

 

JANE (CONT'D)

I mean, hello. You've barely even spoken

to me for months.

 

She's gone. Lester notices Carolyn looking at him critically.

 

LESTER

Oh, what, you're mother-of-the-year? You

treat her like an employee.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

10.

CONTINUED: (2)

 

 

CAROLYN

(taken aback)

What?!

 

Lester is quiet, staring at his plate.

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

(more authority)

What?

 

Lester gets up and starts after Jane, taking his plate with

him.

 

LESTER

I'm going to get some ice cream.

 

Carolyn watches him go, irritated.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

Jane stands at the sink, rinsing off her plate. Lester

enters.

 

LESTER

 

Honey, I'm sorry. I...

 

Jane turns and stares at him, waiting for him to finish.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

I'm sorry I haven't been more available,

I just... I'm...

 

He's looking to her for a little help here, but she's too

uncomfortable with this sudden intimacy to give him any.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

(finally)

You know, you don't always have to wait

for me to come to you...

 

JANE

Oh, great. So now it's my fault?

 

LESTER

 

I didn't say that. It's nobody's fault.

Janie, what happened? You and I used to

be pals.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

On VIDEO: We're looking through GREENHOUSE WINDOWS at Lester

and Jane in the kitchen We can't hear what they're saying,

but it's obvious it's not going well.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

11.

CONTINUED:

 

 

Jane puts her plate in the dishwasher and leaves. We FOLLOW

HER out the door, then the camera JERKS back to Lester

calling after her.

 

CLOSE on the face of RICKY FITTS, illuminated by the screen

of his DIGICAM as he videotapes. Ricky is eighteen, but his

eyes are much older. Beneath his Zen-like tranquility lurks

something wounded... and dangerous.

 

His POV, on VIDEO: Through the kitchen window, we see Lester

at the sink, rinsing off his plate, muttering to himself. His

head suddenly jerks up and he looks at us, as if he realizes

he's being watched.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

 

Lester's POV: We're looking out through the kitchen window at

the point where Ricky was just standing, but he's no longer

there.

 

Lester turns off the faucet, dries his hands, then tosses the

towel on the counter on his way out, where it lands next to a

framed PHOTOGRAPH of Lester, Carolyn, and a much-younger

Jane, taken several years earlier at an amusement park.

 

It's startling how happy they look.

 

 

EXT. SALE HOUSE - DAY

 

CLOSE on a wooden SIGN that reads:

 

OPEN HOUSE TODAY

 

BURNHAM & ASSOCIATES REALTY

 

555-0195 Carolyn Burnham

 

The sign is planted in front of a RUN-DOWN HOME in a run-down

neighborhood. The Mercedes is parked in front of the house.

Carolyn, wearing a smart business suit, is unloading a box of

cleaning supplies and a BOOMBOX from the back of the Mercedes

when something across the street catches her eye.

 

Her POV: In front of a different house with much more curb

appeal is another SIGN, featuring a picture of a handsome

silver-haired MAN. It reads:

 

Another One SOLD By Buddy Kane

 

The Real Estate King 555-0100

 

Carolyn frowns and slams the back of the Mercedes shut.

 

12.

 

INT. SALE HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

 

 

The interior of this house is ugly, oppressive and tasteless.

Carolyn opens the front door, breathes deeply and solemnly

announces:

 

CAROLYN

I will sell this house today.

 

She neatly arranges her sales materials on a desk, then

strips down to her undergarments.

 

MONTAGE:

 

We see Carolyn, working with fierce concentration as she:

 

Cleans glass doors that overlook the patio and pool;

 

Doggedly scrubs countertops in the kitchen;

 

Perches on a stepladder to dust a cheap-looking ceiling fan

in the master bedroom;

 

And vacuums a dirty carpet that will never be clean.

 

Throughout all this, she keeps repeating to herself:

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

I will sell this house today. I will sell

this house today. I will sell this house

today.

 

INT. SALE HOUSE - BATHROOM - LATER

 

Carolyn stands in front of the mirror, wearing her suit once

more, applying lipstick. She stares at her reflection

critically.

 

CAROLYN

 

I will sell this house today.

 

She says this as if it were a threat, then notices a smudge

on the mirror and wipes it off.

 

EXT. SALE HOUSE - FRONT YARD - LATER

 

The front door opens to reveal Carolyn, greeting us with the

smile she thinks could sell ice to an Eskimo.

 

CAROLYN

Welcome. I'm Carolyn Burnham!

 

13.

 

INT. SALE HOUSE - FOYER - CONTINUOUS

 

 

Smiling, Carolyn leads a man and woman into the living room.

They're thirtyish, and they've seen a lot of houses today.

 

CAROLYN

This living room is very dramatic. Wait

'til you see the native stone fireplace!

 

The man and woman glance around the dark room, unimpressed.

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

A simple cream would really lighten

things up. You could even put in a

skylight.

 

The woman wrinkles her face, skeptical.

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

Well, why don't we go into the kitchen?

 

INT. SALE HOUSE - KITCHEN - LATER

 

Carolyn enters, followed by a different couple in their

fifties.

 

 

CAROLYN

It's a dream come true for any cook. Just

filled with positive energy. Huh?

 

INT. SALE HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - LATER

 

Carolyn stands with a different couple: African American,

late twenties. The woman is pregnant.

 

CAROLYN

...and you'll be surprised how much a

ceiling fan can cut down on your energy

costs.

 

EXT. SALE HOUSE - BACK YARD - LATER

 

Carolyn stands by the pool next to two fortyish WOMEN.

 

CAROLYN

You know, you could have some really fun

backyard get-togethers out here.

 

 

WOMAN #1

The ad said this pool was "lagoon-like."

There's nothing "lagoon-like" about it.

Except for maybe the bugs.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

14.

CONTINUED:

 

 

WOMAN #2

There's not even any plants out here.

 

CAROLYN

 

(re: shrub)

What do you call this? Is this not a

plant? If you have a problem with the

plants, I can always call my landscape

architect. Solved.

 

WOMAN #2

I mean, I think "lagoon," I think

waterfall, I think tropical. This is a

cement hole.

 

A beat.

 

CAROLYN

I have some tiki torches in the garage.

 

INT. SALE HOUSE - SUN ROOM - LATER

 

Carolyn enters, alone. She's furious. She locks the sliding

glass door and starts to pull the vertical blinds shut, then

stops. Standing very still, with the blinds casting shadows

across her face, she starts to cry: brief, staccato SOBS that

seemingly escape against her will. Suddenly she SLAPS

herself, hard.

 

CAROLYN

Shut up. Stop it. You... Weak!

 

But the tears continue. She SLAPS herself again.

 

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

Weak. Baby. Shut up. Shut up! Shut up!

 

She SLAPS herself repeatedly until she stops crying. She

stands there, taking deep breaths until she has everything

under control, then pulls the blinds shut, once again all

business. She walks out calmly, leaving us alone in the dark,

empty room.

 

We HEAR CHEERING and APPLAUSE.

 

INT. HIGH SCHOOL GYMNASIUM - NIGHT

 

We're at a high-school BASKETBALL GAME. Teenage boys play a

fast and furious game. One team wearing pale blue and white

uniforms scores a basket. Perky cheerleaders jump up and down

as the CROWD goes wild.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

15.

CONTINUED:

 

 

Seated in the bleachers, next to the high school BAND, is a

group of about twenty TEENAGE GIRLS, dressed in pale blue and

white uniforms. Among them, Jane sits next to ANGELA HAYES.

At sixteen, Angela is strikingly beautiful; with perfect even

features, blonde hair and a nubile young body, she's the

archetypal American dream girl.

 

Jane stands and scans the bleachers.

 

 

ANGELA

Who are you looking for?

 

JANE

My parents are coming tonight. They're

trying to, you know, take an active

interest in me.

 

ANGELA

Gross. I hate it when my mom does that.

 

JANE

They're such assholes. Why can't they

just have their own lives?

 

INT. MERCEDES-BENZ ML320 - CONTINUOUS

 

 

Carolyn drives. Lester is slumped in the passenger seat.

 

LESTER

What makes you so sure she wants us to be

there? Did she ask us to come?

 

CAROLYN

Of course not. She doesn't want us to

know how important this is to her. But

she's been practicing her steps for

weeks.

 

LESTER

Well, I bet money she's going to resent

it. And I'm missing the James Bond

marathon on TNT.

 

CAROLYN

Lester, this is important. I'm sensing a

real distance growing between you and

Jane.

 

 

LESTER

Growing? She hates me.

 

CAROLYN

She's just willful.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

16.

CONTINUED:

 

 

LESTER

 

She hates you too.

 

Carolyn stares at him, unsure of how to respond.

 

INT. HIGH SCHOOL GYMNASIUM - LATER

 

The uniformed girls now stand in formation on the gym floor.

 

ANNOUNCER

(over P.A.)

And now, for your half-time

entertainment, Rockwell High's award-

winning Dancing Spartanettes!

 

In the crowded stands, Lester and Carolyn find seats.

 

LESTER

We can leave right after this, right?

 

The HIGH SCHOOL BAND plays "ON BROADWAY." On the gym floor,

the girls perform. They're well-rehearsed, but too young to

carry off the ambitious Vegas routine they're attempting.

 

Lester, watching from the stands, picks out his daughter.

 

His POV: Jane performs well, concentrating. Dancing awkwardly

next to her is Angela. Suddenly Angela looks right at us and

smiles... a lazy, insolent smile.

 

Lester leans forward in his seat.

 

His POV: We're focused on Angela now. Everything starts to

SLOW DOWN... the MUSIC acquires an eerie ECHO...

 

We ZOOM slowly toward Lester as he watches, transfixed.

 

His POV: Angela's awkwardness gives way to a fluid grace, and

"ON BROADWAY" FADES into dreamy, hypnotic MUSIC. The light on

Angela grows stronger, and the other girls DISAPPEAR

entirely.

 

Lester is suddenly alone in the stands, spellbound.

 

His POV: Angela looks directly at us now, dancing only for

Lester. Her movements take on a blatantly erotic edge as she

starts to unzip her uniform, teasing us with an expression

that's both innocent and knowing, then... she pulls her

uniform OPEN and a profusion of RED ROSE PETALS spill

forth... and we SMASH CUT TO:

 

17.

 

INT. HIGH SCHOOL GYMNASIUM - CONTINUOUS

 

Angela, fully clothed, is once again surrounded by the other

girls. The HIGH SCHOOL BAND plays its last note, the Dancing

Spartanettes strike their final pose, and the audience

APPLAUDS.

 

Carolyn claps along with the rest of the audience. Lester

just sits there, unable to take his eyes off Angela.

 

EXT. HIGH SCHOOL GYMNASIUM - LATER

 

The game is long over. Jane and Angela come out of the gym.

 

JANE

Oh shit, they're still here.

 

Her POV: Lester and Carolyn stand at the edge of the parking

lot.

 

LESTER

 

Janie!

 

CAROLYN

Hi! I really enjoyed that!

 

She crosses reluctantly toward her parents, followed by

Angela.

 

LESTER

Congratulations, honey, you were great.

 

JANE

I didn't win anything.

 

LESTER

(to Angela)

Hi, I'm Lester. Janie's dad.

 

 

ANGELA

Oh. Hi.

 

An awkward beat.

 

JANE

This is my friend, Angela Hayes.

 

LESTER

Okay, good to meet you. You were also

good tonight. Very... precise.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

18.

 

CONTINUED:

 

 

ANGELA

(warming)

Thanks.

 

CAROLYN

(to Angela)

Nice to meet you, Angela.

(to Jane)

Honey, I'm so proud of you. I watched you

very closely, and you didn't screw up

once.

(then, to Lester)

Okay, we have to go.

 

She starts toward the parking lot. Lester stays behind.

 

LESTER

So, what are you girls doing now?

 

JANE

 

Dad.

 

ANGELA

We're going out for pizza.

 

LESTER

Oh really, do you need a ride? We can

give you a ride. I have a car. You wanna

come with us?

 

ANGELA

Thanks... but I have a car.

 

LESTER

Oh, you have a car. Oh. That's great!

That's great, because Janie's thinking

about getting a car soon too, aren't you,

honey?

 

 

JANE

(you freak)

Dad. Mom's waiting for you.

 

LESTER

Well, it was very nice meeting you,

Angela. Any, uh, friend of Janie's is a

friend of mine.

 

Angela smiles, aware of the power she has over him. He is

mesmerized; grateful, even.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

Well... I'll be seeing you around then.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

19.

 

CONTINUED: (2)

 

 

Lester waves awkwardly as he crosses off.

 

JANE

Could he be any more pathetic?

 

ANGELA

I think it's sweet. And I think he and

your mother have not had sex in a long

time.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - A FEW HOURS LATER

 

CLOSE on a solitary red ROSE PETAL as it falls slowly through

the air.

 

We're looking down on Lester and Carolyn in bed. Even in

sleep, Carolyn looks determined. Lester is awake and stares

up at us.

 

LESTER

 

It's the weirdest thing.

 

The ROSE PETAL drifts into view, landing on his pillow.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

I feel like I've been in a coma for about

twenty years, and I'm just now waking up.

 

More ROSE PETALS fall onto the bed, and he smiles up at...

 

His POV: Angela, naked, FLOATS above us as a deluge of ROSE

PETALS falls around her. Her hair fans out around her head

and GLOWS with a subtle, burnished light. She looks down at

us with a smile that is all things...

 

Lester smiles back and LAUGHS, as ROSE PETALS cover his face.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

Spec-tac-ular.

 

EXT. ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - CONTINUOUS

 

A WHITE BMW 328si CONVERTIBLE is parked on the street outside

the Burnham's house. We HEAR girlish LAUGHTER from inside.

 

INT. ANGELA'S BMW - CONTINUOUS

 

Angela is behind the wheel, Jane in the passenger seat.

They're passing a JOINT back and forth.

 

JANE

 

I'm sorry my dad was so weird tonight.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

20.

CONTINUED:

 

 

ANGELA

It's okay. I'm used to guys drooling over

me. It started when I was about twelve,

I'd go out to dinner with my parents.

Every Thursday night, Red Lobster. And

every guy there would stare at me when I

walked in. And I knew what they were

thinking. Just like I knew guys at school

thought about me when they jerked off.

 

JANE

 

Vomit.

 

ANGELA

No, I liked it. And I still like it. If

people I don't even know look at me and

want to fuck me, it means I really have a

shot at being a model. Which is great,

because there's nothing worse in life

than being ordinary.

 

An awkward beat. Jane stares at the floor.

 

JANE

I really think it'll happen for you.

 

ANGELA

Oh, I know. Because everything that was

meant to happen, does. Eventually.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

On VIDEO: Jane gets out of the car, still LAUGHING, and waves

as Angela pulls away. We ZOOM toward Jane as she walks up the

driveway. She turns suddenly, sensing our presence.

 

Her POV: We're looking at the COLONIAL HOUSE next door where

the moving van was parked earlier. The front porch is

shrouded in darkness... then a PORCH LIGHT abruptly reveals

Ricky. As usual, he's dressed conservatively. There is a

BEEPER attached to his belt, and his DIGICAM dangles loosely

around his neck.

 

Irritated, Jane stares at him, hard.

 

 

JANE

Asshole.

 

He looks back at her curiously, then raises his Digicam and

starts to videotape her.

 

His POV, on VIDEO: Jane, angry and self-conscious, turns and

walks quickly toward her house, flipping us off as she goes.

 

21.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - FOYER - CONTINUOUS

 

Jane enters, closes and locks the door. She quickly TURNS OFF

THE LIGHT that's been left on for her, then peeks through a

window.

 

Her POV: There's no sign of Ricky.

 

Jane turns back into the room, her heart racing... and

smiles.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - JANE'S BEDROOM - THE NEXT MORNING

 

CLOSE on an ADDRESS BOOK: A man's hand flips to the H page

and then his finger stops at the name Angela Hayes.

 

Lester, dressed for work, goes through Jane's address book.

We HEAR the SHOWER running in the adjacent bathroom. He grabs

Jane's phone and dials, then stands with the receiver to his

ear, nervous.

 

ANGELA

 

(over phone line)

Hello? Hello?

 

Lester is frozen, unable to speak. Suddenly, the SHOWER is

turned off in the next room. Lester hangs up and exits

quickly. A moment, then the PHONE RINGS. Jane emerges from

the bathroom, a towel wrapped around her torso, drying her

wet hair. She picks up the PHONE.

 

JANE

Hello?

 

INT. HAYES HOUSE - ANGELA'S BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS

 

Angela is sprawled across her bed, on the phone.

 

ANGELA

Why'd you call me?

 

INTERCUT WITH JANE IN HER

BEDROOM:

 

 

JANE

I didn't.

 

ANGELA

Well, my phone just rang and I answered

it and somebody hung up and then I star

sixty-nined and it called you back.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

22.

CONTINUED:

 

 

JANE

I was in the shower.

 

Then Jane notices her address book open to the H page.

 

JANE (CONT'D)

Oh, gross.

 

EXT. BURNHAM HOUSE - CONTINUOUS

 

On VIDEO: We're across from Jane's WINDOW, looking in. Jane

picks up the address book, frowning. She speaks into the

phone, but we can't hear her.

 

WOMAN'S VOICE (O.C.)

(sing song)

Rick-y! Break-fast!

 

INT. FITTS HOUSE - RICKY'S BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS

 

 

Ricky stands at his window, videotaping. He lowers his

Digicam, but his eyes remain locked on Jane across the way.

 

RICKY

Be right there.

 

INT. FITTS HOUSE - KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER

 

BARBARA FITTS stands at the stove, flipping bacon strips

mechanically, her eyes focused elsewhere. At least ten years

younger than her husband, she's pretty in a June Cleaver-ish

way. The Colonel sits at a dinette reading The Wall Street

Journal. Ricky enters.

 

RICKY

Mom.

 

Startled, Barbara turns to him.

 

BARBARA

Hello.

 

As she attempts to serve him bacon:

 

 

RICKY

I don't eat bacon, remember?

 

BARBARA

(unnerved)

I'm sorry, I must have forgotten.

 

Ricky serves himself scrambled eggs from another pan, then

joins his father at the table.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

23.

CONTINUED:

 

 

RICKY

 

What's new in the world, Dad?

 

COLONEL

This country is going straight to hell.

 

A DOORBELL rings. The Colonel and Barbara look at each other,

alarmed.

 

COLONEL (CONT'D)

Are you expecting anyone?

 

BARBARA

No.

(thinks)

No.

 

The Colonel heads toward the living room, a little puffed up.

 

INT. FITTS HOUSE - FOYER - MOMENTS LATER

 

The Colonel opens the front door to reveal the two JIMS.

 

 

JIM #1

Hi.

 

JIM #2

Welcome to the neighborhood.

 

Jim #1 holds out a basket filled with flowers, vegetables and

a small white cardboard box tied with raffia.

 

JIM #1

Just a little something from our garden.

 

JIM #2

Except for the pasta, we got that at

Fallaci's.

 

JIM #1

 

It's unbelievably fresh. You just drop it

in the water and it's done.

 

The Colonel stares at them, suspicious.

 

JIM #1 (CONT'D)

(offers his hand)

Jim Olmeyer. Two doors down. Welcome to

the neighborhood.

 

COLONEL

(shakes)

Colonel Frank Fitts, U.S. Marine Corps.

 

(CONTINUED)

 

24.

CONTINUED:

 

 

JIM #1

Nice to meet you. And this is my

partner...

 

JIM #2

(offers his hand)

Jim Berkley, but people call me J.B.

 

COLONEL

Let's cut to the chase, okay? What are

you guys selling?

 

JIM #2

(after a beat)

Nothing. We just wanted to say hi to our

new neighbors--

 

 

COLONEL

Yeah, yeah, yeah. But you said you're

partners. So what's your business?

 

The Jims look at each other, then back at the Colonel.

 

JIM #1

Well, he's a tax attorney.

 

JIM #2

And he's an anesthesiologist.

 

The Colonel looks at them, confused. Then it dawns on him.

 

INT. COLONEL'S FORD EXPLORER - LATER

 

The Colonel drives, staring darkly at the road ahead. In the

passenger seat, Ricky is using a CALCULATOR and jotting

numbers down in a NOTEBOOK.

 

COLONEL

 

How come these faggots always have to rub

it in your face? How can they be so

shameless?

 

RICKY

That's the whole thing, Dad. They don't

feel like it's anything to be ashamed of.

 

The Colonel looks at Ricky sharply.

 

COLONEL

Well, it is.

 

A beat, as Ricky continues his calculations, before he

realizes a response is expected from him. Then:

 

(CONTINUED)

 

25.

CONTINUED:

 

RICKY

Yeah, you're right.

 

The Colonel's eyes flash angrily.

 

COLONEL

Don't placate me like I'm your mother,

boy.

 

Ricky sighs, then looks at his father.

 

RICKY

Forgive me, sir, for speaking so bluntly,

but those fags make me want to puke my

fucking guts out.

 

The Colonel is taken aback but quickly covers.

 

COLONEL

Me too, son. Me too.

 

Case closed, Ricky goes back to his calculations.

 

CLOSE on the pencil in his hands: He's totaling two columns

of NUMBERS. Under the column "Income" he writes in swift,

bold strokes: $24,950.00.

 

 

EXT. HIGH SCHOOL CAMPUS - A SHORT TIME LATER

 

Jane and Angela are standing with two other TEENAGE GIRLS.

 

ANGELA

I'm serious, he just pulled down his

pants and yanked it out. You know, like,

say hello to Mr. Happy.

 

TEENAGE GIRL #1

 

Gross.

 

ANGELA

It wasn't gross. It was kind of cool.

 

TEENAGE GIRL #1

 

So, did you do it with him?

 

 

ANGELA

Of course I did. He is a really well-

known photographer? He shoots for Elle on

like, a regular basis? It would have been

so majorly stupid of me to turn him down.

 

26.

 

TEENAGE GIRL #2

 

You are a total prostitute.

 

ANGELA

Hey. That's how things really are. You

just don't know, because you're this

pampered little suburban chick.

 

 

TEENAGE GIRL #2

 

So are you. You've only been in Seventeen once, and you

looked fat, so stop acting like you're goddamn Christy

Turlington.

 

The two TEENAGE GIRLS move away from Jane and Angela.

 

ANGELA

(calling off)

Cunt!

(then)

I am so sick of people taking their

insecurities out on me.

 

The Colonel's Ford Explorer pulls up, and Ricky gets out.

 

JANE

Oh my God. That's the pervert who filmed

me last night.

 

ANGELA

Him? Jane. No way. He's a total lunatic.

 

JANE

 

You know him?

 

ANGELA

Yeah. We were on the same lunch shift

when I was in ninth grade, and he would

always say the most random, weird things,

and then one day, he was just like, gone.

And then, Connie Cardullo told me he his

parents had to put him in a mental

institution.

 

JANE

Why? What did he do?

 

ANGELA

What do you mean?

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

 

27.

CONTINUED:

 

 

JANE

Well, they can't put you away just for

saying weird things.

 

Angela stares at Jane, then her mouth widens into a smile.

 

ANGELA

You total slut. You've got a crush on

him.

 

JANE

What? Please.

 

 

ANGELA

You were defending him! You love him. You

want to have like, ten thousand of his

babies.

 

JANE

Shut up.

 

Jane suddenly finds Ricky standing in front of her.

 

RICKY

Hi. My name's Ricky. I just moved next

door to you.

 

JANE

I know. I kinda remember this really

creepy incident when you were filming me

last night?

 

 

RICKY

I didn't mean to scare you. I just think

you're interesting.

 

Angela shoots a wide-eyed look at Jane, who ignores it.

 

JANE

Thanks, but I really don't need to have

some psycho obsessing about me right now.

 

RICKY

I'm not obsessing. I'm just curious.

 

He looks at her intently, his eyes searching hers. Jane is

unnerved and has to look away. Ricky smiles and walks off.

 

ANGELA

What a freak. And why does he dress like

a Bible salesman?

 

(CONTINUED)

 

 

28.

CONTINUED: (2)

 

 

JANE

He's like, so confident. That can't be

real.

 

ANGELA

I don't believe him. I mean, he didn't

even like, look at me once.

 

INT. FITTS HOUSE - DEN - THAT NIGHT

 

CLOSE on a TV SCREEN: "Hogan's Heroes" on Nick at Nite.

 

The Colonel and Barbara are seated on a couch, watching

television. The Colonel is smiling, enjoying the show;

Barbara just stares. The Colonel CHUCKLES at a joke and

startles her.

 

We HEAR a door opening elsewhere in the house, and Ricky

enters.

 

 

RICKY

Hey.

 

He sits on the couch, next to his father, and watches TV

along with them. The Colonel's smile fades.

 

BARBARA

(out of the blue)

I'm sorry, what?

 

RICKY

Mom. Nobody said anything.

 

BARBARA

Oh. I'm sorry.

 

The three of them stare at the TV, like strangers in an

airport.

 

INT. HOTEL BALLROOM - NIGHT

 

 

We HEAR MUSIC under a room full of people all talking at

once, as Lester and Carolyn enter a hotel ballroom. We FOLLOW

THEM as they pass a SIGN that reads:

 

GREATER ROCKWELL REALTOR RESOURCES GROUP

 

CAROLYN

--everyone here is with their spouse or

their significant other. How would it

look if I showed up with no one?

 

(CONTINUED)

 

29.

CONTINUED:

 

 

LESTER

 

Well, you always end up ignoring me and

going off--

 

Inside the ballroom, well-dressed real estate professionals

stand in clumps, chatting. Catering waiters serve hors

d'eouvres.

 

CAROLYN

Now listen to me. This is an important

business function. As you know, my

business is selling an image. And part of

my job is to live that image--

 

LESTER

Just say whatever you want to say and

spare me the propaganda.

 

CAROLYN

(spots someone)

Hi, Shirley!

(to Lester)

Listen, just do me a favor. Act happy

tonight?

 

LESTER

(grins stupidly)

I am happy, honey.

 

Carolyn's jaw tightens, then:

 

 

CAROLYN

(spots someone)

Oh! Buddy!

 

She drags Lester toward a silver-haired MAN and his much

younger WIFE. We recognize the Man as BUDDY KANE, The Real

Estate King.

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

(shakes Buddy's hand)

Buddy! Buddy. Hi! Good to see you again.

 

BUDDY

It's so good to see you too, Catherine.

 

CAROLYN

Carolyn.

 

BUDDY

 

Carolyn! Of course. How are you?

 

(CONTINUED)

 

30.

CONTINUED: (2)

 

 

CAROLYN

Very well, thank you.

(to his wife)

Hello, Christy.

 

CHRISTY

Hello.

 

 

CAROLYN

My husband, Lester--

 

BUDDY

(shakes Lester's hand)

It's a pleasure.

 

LESTER

Oh, we've met before, actually. This

thing last year. Or the Christmas thing

at the Sheraton.

 

BUDDY

Oh, yes.

 

LESTER

 

It's okay. I wouldn't remember me either.

 

He LAUGHS. A little too loudly. Carolyn quickly joins in.

 

CAROLYN

(forced gaiety)

Honey. Don't be weird.

 

She smiles her most winning smile at him. He knows this

persona well, only it's never pissed him off as much as it

does right now.

 

LESTER

All right, honey. I won't be weird.

(his face close to hers)

I'll be whatever you want me to be.

 

And he kisses her--a soft, warm kiss that speaks unmistakably

of sex--then turns to the others and grins.

 

LESTER (CONT'D)

We have a very healthy relationship.

 

BUDDY

I see.

 

Carolyn's smile is frozen on her face.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

31.

CONTINUED: (3)

 

 

LESTER

Well. I don't know about you, but I need

a drink.

 

He crosses off. Carolyn, Buddy and Christy watch him go.

 

INT. HOTEL BALLROOM - MOMENTS LATER

 

Lester stands at the bar. A bartender pours him a drink.

 

LESTER

 

Whoa. Put a little more in there, cowboy.

 

The bartender complies. Lester takes his drink and turns to

face the center of the room.

 

His POV: Carolyn is talking to Buddy and Christy. She's on:

smiling, animated, LAUGHING too loud at their jokes.

 

Lester shakes his head. Ricky approaches him, wearing a

waiter's uniform, carrying a tray of empty glasses.

 

RICKY

Excuse me. Don't you live on Robin Hood

Trail? The house with the red door?

 

LESTER

(suspicious)

Yeah.

 

RICKY

I'm Ricky Fitts. I just moved into the

house next to you.

 

LESTER

Oh. Hi, Ricky Fitts. I'm Lester Burnham.

 

 

RICKY

Hi, Lester Burnham.

 

A beat. Lester looks away, scans the crowd, then downs the

rest of his drink in one gulp. Ricky just stands there,

watching him. Finally Lester turns back to Ricky: what does

this kid want?

 

RICKY (CONT'D)

Do you party?

 

LESTER

Excuse me?

 

RICKY

Do you get high?

 

(CONTINUED)

 

 

32.

CONTINUED:

 

 

Lester's surprised, but instantly intrigued.

 

INT. HOTEL BALLROOM - MOMENTS LATER

 

Carolyn and Buddy are deep in conversation. Christy has

wandered off. Carolyn is nervous; Buddy seems amused.

 

CAROLYN

You know, I probably wouldn't even tell

you this if I weren't a little tipsy,

but... I am in complete awe of you. I

mean, your firm is, hands down, the Rolls

Royce of local Real Estate firms, and

your personal sales record is, is, is

very intimidating. You know, I'd love to

sit down with you and just pick your

brain, if you'd ever be willing. I

suppose, technically, I'm the

"competition," but... I mean, hey, I

don't flatter myself that I'm even in the

same league as you...

 

BUDDY

 

I'd love to.

 

CAROLYN

(shocked)

Really?

 

BUDDY

Absolutely. Call my secretary and have

her schedule a lunch.

 

CAROLYN

I'll do that. Thank you.

 

They look at each other for a beat, then look away. This

situation is loaded and they both know it.

 

EXT. HOTEL - LATER

 

Ricky and Lester stand next to a dumpster behind the service

entrance to the hotel, smoking a JOINT.

 

 

LESTER

...did you ever see that movie, where the

body's walking around holding its own

head? And then the head goes down on that

babe?

 

RICKY

Re-Animator.

 

 

(CONTINUED)

 

33.

CONTINUED:

 

 

Suddenly, the service entrance opens, and a large CATERING

BOSS in a cheap suit peers out at them. Ricky hides the

joint.

 

 

CATERING BOSS

(to Ricky)

Look. I'm not paying you to...

(eyes Lester, suspiciously)

...do whatever it is you're doing out

here.

 

RICKY

Fine. So don't pay me.

 

CATERING BOSS

Excuse me?

 

RICKY

I quit. So you don't have to pay me. Now,

leave me alone.

 

CATERING BOSS

 

Asshole.

 

He goes back inside. Lester looks at Ricky, who shrugs.

 

LESTER

I think you just became my personal hero.

(then)

Doesn't that make you nervous, just

quitting your job like that? Well, I

guess when you're all of, what? Sixteen?

 

RICKY

Eighteen.

(then)

I just do these gigs as a cover. I have

other sources of income. But my dad

interferes less in my life when I pretend

to be an upstanding young citizen with a

respectable job.

 

CAROLYN (O.C.)

Lester?

 

Carolyn is standing in the open service entrance. Lester

quickly hides the joint behind his back.

 

CAROLYN (CONT'D)

What are you doing?

 

(CONTINUED)

 

34.

CONTINUED: (2)

 

 

LESTER

Honey, this is...

(laughs)

Ricky Fitts. This is Ricky Fitts.

 

RICKY

I'm Ricky Fitts, I just moved in the

house next to you. I go to school with

your daughter.

 

LESTER

 

With Jane? Really?

 

RICKY

Yeah. Jane.

 

CAROLYN

Hi.

(then, to Lester)

I'm ready to go. I'll meet you out front.

 

And she goes back inside.

 

LESTER

Uh-oh. I'm in trouble. Nice meeting you,

Ricky Fitts. Thanks for the, uh, thing.

 

RICKY

Any time.

 

Lester goes inside.

 

 

RICKY (CONT'D)

(calls after him)

Lester. If you want any more, you know

where I live.

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - FAMILY ROOM - LATER

 

Jane and Angela are watching MTV. We HEAR the back door open.

 

JANE

Oh, shit. They're home. Quick, let's go

up to my room.

 

Jane switches off the TV.

 

ANGELA

I should say hi to your dad.

(off Jane's look)

I don't want to be rude.

 

She starts toward the kitchen. Jane doesn't like this.

 

35.

 

 

INT. BURNHAM HOUSE - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

 

Lester enters and opens the refrigerator.

 

ANGELA (O.C.)

Nice suit.

 

He turns, and is instantly transfixed by:

 

His POV: Angela leans against the counter, twirling her hair.

 

ANGELA (CONT'D)

You're looking good, Mr. Burnham.

 

She starts toward him.

 

ANGELA (CONT'D)


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